Audience Response to Email

The email that I have shown in my previous blog post didn't achieve everything that I wanted it to as the third link of the narrative and singing together didn't work. I have uploaded the video to vimeo again and sent out another email to the same audience - hopefully this one will work!

I have however received some feedback already on the first two links that worked:

So, above is the feedback that I have already received from some of my target audience about the first two links in the email that worked; the black and white and colour comparisons and the narrative rough cut. Overall, each person so far has gone for the black and white version rather that the colour, which I thought would be the overall consensus. Although the narrative and singing rough cut didn't work, my first screenshot which has feedback in, talks about how much they like the narrative and the continuous storyline. They also said how they linked certain parts of the scenes and also the graininess effect on the footage, which is very good. I am also pleased that I gave me some constructive criticism as it gives me something to work with. 

This was the email that I sent out again with the new link on. I added the link in once it had uploaded: