So, I have received some feedback for my rough edit and it was that the narrative should be more coherant and that it should flow throughout the video, rather than being disjoined and having different scenes. To act as an example, I was told to watch Ed Sheeran's music video: The A Team
I really like how this was done. It doesn't have many snazzy effects or choppy editing, it is just very plain and simple. When the girl stops and looks up to the sky and holds her arms out, like a religious figure, it doesn't really fit with the lyrics that were being sung at that time, however it worked. So this means that I could have my narrative ongoing, however it doesn't have to directly link the lyrics. Although i'd have ongoing narrative, I would still use the parts where the singer comes into it, however just less.
My task is to now have a think about how I could make the narrative ongoing and think about what else I could film and when.
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