After receiving my audience feedback on my adverts, a few errors were picked up on and as a result of this, I have changed them both:
I have changed the bottom section slightly where there is information about the 5 new tracks that have been added, so that it makes more sense. Before I changed it, I had this:
"which another 5 featured tracks" doesn't make sense, so above, I have changed the sentence so that it makes sense. The feedback that I received about this is in the post above.
A mistake was also picked up on here, which was "hrard", there was a spelling mistake which I have changed to "heard". This is what it looked like previously:
These are the final adverts above, as they both have now been changed.
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