Monday, 10 February 2014

Feedback on Text Comparisons

After I sent out the email below, I received a large number of comments very quickly, which was fantastic. A lot of the comments have offered a range of improvements to make and also what they like about the album cover, which is great as there is a mixture of positive and negative criticism mixed together:


This is the different feedback that I have received as a result of sending this email:




This comment above was made by a music professional and his suggestions/feedback is for if I was going to produce this album for sales, which is great; however cannot be applied to this project. Although I can't apply it to this project, this feedback is fantastic for me to take on board and apply to my personal music/albums. I understand that the text on the album cover is hard to see, so I will have a bit more of an experiment with it and see what I can do. 




This comment above is from a lecturer at Teesside University where I am wanting to go to study media, so it is a real honour to receive feedback from Mick. He has offered some very high level feedback and for the feedback to use dodge and burn just wouldn't be possible for the software that I am using. Also, I need to be able to show comparisons between my research and my piece. The comments below, however explain his feedback and overall he thinks that what I have done is "fantastic".






The feedback that I have received has suggested that I should go for the effects that I have added on to the text to make it stand out more, so this is what I will do. I will also try and experiment with some of the suggestions that I have received and see what happens when I do. I will post my experimentation on here when I have done it. 

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