More Audience Feedback on Rough Cut

Aside from the other feedback that I have already posted for my most recent rough cut, I have also received the above piece of feedback. I am pleased to hear that the narrative sections that I added into the video have worked well and have met the expectations of my audience, which I predicted that they would; however it is nice to hear it from my target audience. 

This shows that I my research has influenced my final piece well and that I have met the needs of my target which I intended to do from the outset.